In my perfect day I woke up at 8 am and breakfast with my family back home a few chocolate eggs and rich parrot, then we went to the mall to buy clothes and toys nurse I met some old friends who do not speak a while.
We went to lunch at a beautiful place where they served a delicious meal, after finishing lunch we went to eat ice cream and went home to play with the family and also saw a very beautiful film and I went to bed happy in the best day of my life was my sister's birthday.
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